I liked the story, but damn, why did nobody read this between writing an publishing? The continuity is a disaster! Sentences spoken by the wrong people, information appearing or lost between pages, POVs changing suddenly in the middle of a chapter. 
No idea if this was AI or a just a sloppy author, but I stopped so often in the flow, just trying to understand what was supposed to happen. And I'm a) non native speaker and b) someone who reads rather superficially and doesn't care too much about anything but a nice plot and okay'ish characters (which is also quite a generous description for some of the chars, because Greed exists and that's it).
Again, I enjoyed the story, but please give it an[other] editor run.