They didn't have any chemistry. The relationship became too physical, too soon, so there is really no romance. She doesn't even really like him for him and he's mostly despondent for most of the book....
They don't take anything out. The third act breakup was unnecessary and silly. We got maybe 10 minutes of them being a great couple and the rest made me question their future relationship status. Most everyone else served to enjoy their relationship though.
I did like the acknowledgements at the end of the book. Makes you appreciate all the behind the scenes that goes into a book. It's a good thing no one refuses to read a book because of my opinions!
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