They were going to hook up after meeting on an app and somehow that brief interaction resulted in love at first sight?
I don't know how to explain it, but Kilgore seemed like he was written to just check boxes. I'm not expecting it to be realistic, but I had to roll my eyes at him. I was not happy with the resolution to the co
mpany situation. I'm siding with his friend on that one.
I really dislike name dropping other modern books in new books. (Hunger games mention and using the name Rue), it just rubs me the wrong way. You've got an entire world you've made up, get creative. Heck, name drop one of your other books, lol!
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